Sunday, May 4, 2025

The Thing in the Forest (2002).

Sometimes the biggest challenge for a critic is getting to know a new writer.  That's kind of a misstatement, in this case, however.  For one thing, not only is the English novelist A.S. Byatt an established name in her own right, she's also one of those authors who often gets touted as a very Important Name.  Entertain conjecture of a time when it was possible to speak of something known as an Ivory Tower.  It is, or was (once upon a time) something like a catch-all term to describe the hallowed halls of academe.  To tell you the truth, I don't know what that's like.  I never got the chance to experience whatever this type of setting was supposed to be.  However, everything I've either read or heard on the subject tells of a brief span of time (possibly from an inception dating to somewhere in or about the 1920s, all the way to a quiet and unremarked upon downfall at or near the mid-60s) when this academic establishment was meant to be a summation of all the best and brightest in terms of the Arts and Sciences.  In the fields of literary study, this amounted to the creation of a kind of hierarchy of what was considered the "Best Kind" of literature, if you can believe it.  I'm not sure that this was a mindset that ever took a real hold of the general audience, yet it was a criterion of a collection of critics and college professors such as Edmund Wilson, William Empson, and F.R. Leavis.  If you don't know who I'm talking about, let that be history's verdict on guys like them.

In retrospect, it becomes easy to see just how misguided the whole idea of an Upper Echelon of the Written Word is, when you stop and think it over.  There will always be too many stories for even a single lifetime (at least I hope that's true), and beyond a general ability to say that this narrative works while the other one doesn't. it's always going to be perhaps impossible to claim any one text as the Greatest Novel Ever Written!  I think the best any of us will ever be able to do is to point to which stories are our favorites, and then see if we have it in us to defend our enthusiasms.  As long as you're not hurting anyone while doing so, then go nuts, I say.  Still, the historical record does show that there was a time when a lot forgotten critics and English Lit 101 instructors seemed to have concocted a shared mission to both define and limit whatever it was that constituted a real book.  Looking back on all that now, the one defining feature that probably still stands out the most about the thought of guys like Wilson and Harold Bloom is that most of them saw fit to dismiss the Literature of the Fantastic as beneath consideration.  This is something they took as a fundamental, axial type of mindset.  It meant there was always going to be this disconnect between what Bloom thought Literature with a capital L was supposed to be, and the actual reading and movie going habits of the public at large.  They were all working with a picture which, due to their snobbery, was always going to remain incomplete.

It meant that there was always going to be a very short list roster of Important Names that would ever be considered worthy of the Ivory Tower.  Here is where you'd find the likes of John Cheever, John Updike, Eudora Welty, Williams Carlo Williams, and Henry James.  The upshot of all this academic hoarding was that it now looks like this close guarding and proselytizing means that there were a lot of good literary talents that had their chances at fame squandered by a bunch of opinion makers who were more concerned with being the In-Crowd, rather than alerting readers to the merits of the artist.  It's a categorical shirking of the critic's proper job, and perhaps that's the most telling verdict of the efforts of Bloom, Leavis, and the artistic outlook they once represented.  The funny part is that they claimed to set their sights forever against the Popular Genres, while also allowing in a handful of scribblers who just so happened to give Horror, Fantasy, and Science Fiction their modern identities.  Hence the Tower could admit the presence of Fantasists like Vladimir Nabokov, Jorge Luis Borges, John Milton, Dante, Homer, and or course, Shakespeare and Charles Dickens.  The idea that any of these guys might have considered themselves popular authors writing to entertain the popular masses never seems to have occurred to Bloom, or a lot of the former chalk dusted gate keepers of the Tower who preceded him.

A.S. Byatt was one of the few women authors who were allowed to have a seat this once so vaunted table.  Looking at the works that bear her name, it's kind of easy to see why they would be willing to let her past the gate (even if she was just a girl).  Not that sexism ever had anything to do with it, heavens no.  After all, didn't Jane Austen and the Bronte sisters have their own spot in the Tower (they'd helpfully point out, all while ignoring the emergence of new talents like Shirley Jackson, Flannery O'Connor, Angela Carter, and Toni Morrison).  The Tower cares nothing for the gender of a writer, of course it doesn't.  All that matters is that you write what we deem our kind of story.  I guess the subgenre of Slice of Life social dramas of the kind pioneered by the likes of Updike and Arthur Miller in the 40s and 60s was considered the "right kind" of literature for them.  Let's just ignore the presence of a Gothic bodice ripper like The Witches of Eastwick, or the haunted presentation of the Salem Witch Trials in The Crucible.  A bit of dystopian Fantasy such as Toward the End of Time, meanwhile can always be written away as a one-off.  Let's just bury these facts under a tailor-made identity that we've constructed for all of these ink-stained wretches, one that is meant to occlude their otherwise obvious liking for, and considerable skill in both the Popular and Dramatic forms of art and storytelling.

Looking back on her career now, it makes the most sense to claim that a combination of luck and timing was one Byatt's side.  When she was allowed entrance to the Tower, her two biggest works at the time (Shadow of a Sun, and The Virgin in the Garden) could both be said to have fit the mold the gatekeepers were looking for.  Both works just mentioned almost deserve to be described as a pair of roman a clef as more than anything else, and so it's it's not too difficult to see why the Ivy Covered Citadel might have thought her to be a worth addition to their trophy collection Library.  As time went on, Byatt proved herself to be one of those literary types who also possessed a deft skill at handling the settings and characterizations from the worlds of Myth.  This appears to have always been something of a latent ability with Byatt, though I think it's telling that she never brought this aspect of her skills as far out to the fore until sometime starting in the early 90s, when it was clear that the heydays of the Tower had begun their long recede into the current level of cultural obscurity that it continues to enjoy today.  It was with novels like Possession, The Children's Book, and in particular short story collections like The Djinn and the Nightingale's Eye that the writer began to show the extent her true literary colors.


The curious thing about all this lies in the way she almost had to allow, or learn to grant herself permission to shrug off the demands of the Ivory Tower, and learn how the realm of Myth might be a safe haven for her own true voice.  It's curious because there's the sense of the author learning how to work her way toward an understanding of the proper expression of the Fantastic that she was able to call herself comfortable with.  It's this idea of struggling to know how to be at ease in the world of once upon a time that is the most striking and permanent feature of just about every word that Byatt wrote.  It starts out as a muted background note in early novels like The Game, until it becomes the over-arching theme in Ragnarök which was her last published work.  It's this notion of finding out if you can ever be at ease with the Fairy Tale that is the hallmark not just of Byatt's novels, but also of the semi short story that's placed under the microscope here today.  This is the modern myth of The Thing in the Forest.

The Story.  

"There were once two little girls who saw, or believed they saw, a thing in a forest. The two little girls were evacuees, who had been sent away from the city by train, with a large number of other children. They all had their names attached to their coats with safety-pins, and they carried little bags or satchels, and the regulation gas-mask. They wore knitted scarves and bonnets or caps, and many had knitted gloves attached to long tapes which ran along their sleeves, inside their coats, and over their shoulders and out, so that they could leave their ten woolen fingers dangling, like a spare pair of hands, like a scarecrow. They all had bare legs and scuffed shoes and wrinkled socks. Most had wounds on their knees in varying stages of freshness and scabbiness. They were at the age when children fall often and their knees were unprotected. With their suitcases, some of which were almost too big to carry, and their other impedimenta, a doll, a toy car, a comic, they were like a disorderly dwarf regiment, stomping along the platform.

"The two little girls had not met before, and made friends on the train. They shared a square of chocolate, and took alternate bites at an apple. One gave the other the inside page of her Beano. Their names were Penny and Primrose. Penny was thin and dark and taller, possibly older, than Primrose, who was plump and blonde and curly. Primrose had bitten nails, and a velvet collar to her dressy green coat. Penny had a bloodless transparent paleness, a touch of blue in her fine lips. Neither of them knew where they were going, nor how long the journey might take. They did not even know why they were going, since neither of their mothers had quite known how to explain the danger to them. How do you say to your child, I am sending you away, because enemy bombs may fall out of the sky, because the streets of the city may burn like forest fires of brick and timber, but I myself am staying here, in what I believe may be daily danger of burning, burying alive, gas, and ultimately perhaps a grey army rolling in on tanks over the suburbs, or sailing its submarines up our river, all guns blazing? So the mothers (who did not resemble each other at all) behaved alike, and explained nothing, it was easier. Their daughters they knew were little girls, who would not be able to understand or imagine.

"The girls discussed on the train whether it was a sort of holiday or a sort of punishment, or a bit of both. Penny had read a book about Boy Scouts, but the children on the train did not appear to be Brownies or Wolf Cubs, only a mongrel battalion of the lost. Both little girls had the idea that these were all perhaps not very good children, possibly being sent away for that reason. They were pleased to be able to define each other as “nice.” They would stick together, they agreed. Try to sit together, and things.


"The train crawled sluggishly further and further away from the city and their homes. It was not a clean train—the upholstery of their carriage had the dank smell of unwashed trousers, and the gusts of hot steam rolling backwards past their windows were full of specks of flimsy ash, and sharp grit, and occasional fiery sparks that pricked face and fingers like hot needles if you opened the window. It was very noisy too, whenever it picked up a little speed. The engine gave great bellowing sighs, and the invisible wheels underneath clicked rhythmically and monotonously, tap tap-tap-CRASH, tap-tap-tap-CRASH. The window-panes were both grimy and misted up. The train stopped frequently, and when it stopped, they used their gloves to wipe rounds, through which they peered out at flooded fields, furrowed hillsides and tiny stations whose names were carefully blacked out, whose platforms were empty of life.

"The children did not know that the namelessness was meant to baffle or delude an invading army. They felt—they did not think it out, but somewhere inside them the idea sprouted—that the erasure was because of them, because they were not meant to know where they were going or, like Hansel and Gretel, to find the way back. They did not speak to each other of this anxiety, but began the kind of conversation children have about things they really disliked, things that upset, or disgusted, or frightened them. Semolina pudding with its grainy texture, mushy peas, fat on roast meat.

"Listening to the stairs and the window-sashes creaking in the dark or the wind. Having your head held roughly back over the basin to have your hair washed, with cold water running down inside your liberty bodice. Gangs in playgrounds. They felt the pressure of all the other alien children in all the other carriages as a potential gang. They shared another square of chocolate, and licked their fingers, and looked out at a great white goose flapping its wings beside an inky pond.

"The sky grew dark grey and in the end the train halted. The children got out, and lined up in a crocodile, and were led to a mud-coloured bus. Penny and Primrose managed to get a seat together, although it was over the wheel, and both of them began to feel sick as the bus bumped along snaking country lanes, under whipping branches, dark leaves on dark wooden arms on a dark sky, with torn strips of thin cloud streaming across a full moon, visible occasionally between them.

"They were billeted temporarily in a mansion commandeered from its owner, which was to be arranged to hold a hospital for the long-term disabled, and a secret store of artworks and other valuables. The children were told they were there temporarily, until families were found to take them all into their homes. Penny and Primrose held hands, and said to each other that it would be wizard if they could go to the same family, because at least they would have each other. They didn’t say anything to the rather tired-looking ladies who were ordering them about, because with the cunning of little children, they knew that requests were most often counter productive, adults liked saying no. They imagined possible families into which they might be thrust. They did not discuss what they imagined, as these pictures, like the black station signs, were too frightening, and words might make some horror solid, in some magical way. Penny, who was a reading child, imagined Victorian dark pillars of severity, like Jane Eyre’s Mr. Brocklehurst, or David Copperfield’s Mr. Murdstone. Primrose imagined— she didn’t know why—a fat woman with a white cap and round red arms who smiled nicely but made the children wear sacking aprons and scrub the steps and the stove. “It’s like we were orphans,” she said to Penny. “But we’re not,” Penny said. “If we manage to stick together . . ." 


"The great house had a double flight of imposing stairs to its front door, and carved griffins and unicorns on its balustrade. There was no lighting, because of the black-out. All the windows were shuttered. No welcoming brightness leaked across door or window-sill. The children trudged up the staircase in their crocodile, hung their coats on numbered makeshift hooks, and were given supper (Irish stew and rice pudding with a dollop of blood-red jam) before going to bed in long makeshift dormitories, where once servants had slept. They had camp-beds (military issue) and grey shoddy blankets. Penny and Primrose got beds together but couldn’t get a corner. They queued to brush their teeth in a tiny washroom, and both suffered (again without speaking) suffocating anxiety about what would happen if they wanted to pee in the middle of the night, because the lavatory was one floor down, the lights were all extinguished, and they were a long way from the door. They also suffered from a fear that in the dark the other children would start laughing and rushing and teasing, and turn themselves into a gang. But that did not happen. Everyone was tired and anxious and orphaned. An uneasy silence, a drift of perturbed sleep, came over them all. The only sounds—from all parts of the great dormitory it seemed—were suppressed snuffles and sobs, from faces pressed into thin pillows.

"When daylight came, things seemed, as they mostly do, brighter and better. The children were given breakfast in a large vaulted room. They sat at trestle tables, eating porridge made with water and a dab of the red jam, heavy cups of strong tea. Then they were told they could go out and play until lunch-time. Children in those days—wherever they came from— were not closely watched, were allowed to come and go freely, and those evacuated children were not herded into any kind of holding-pen, or transit camp. They were told they should be back for lunch at 12:30, by which time those in charge hoped to have sorted out their provisional future lives. It was not known how they would know when it was 12:30, but it was expected that—despite the fact that few of them had wrist-watches—they would know how to keep an eye on the time. It was what they were used to.

"Penny and Primrose went out together, in their respectable coats and laced shoes, on to the terrace. The terrace appeared to them to be vast, and was indeed extensive. It was covered with a fine layer of damp gravel, stained here and there bright green, or invaded by mosses. Beyond it was a stone balustrade, with a staircase leading down to a lawn, which that morning had a quicksilver sheen on the lengthening grass. It was flanked by long flower-beds, full of overblown annuals and damp clumps of stalks. A gardener would have noticed the beginnings of neglect, but these were urban little girls, and they noticed the jungly mass of wet stems, and the wet, vegetable smell. Across the lawn, which seemed considerably vaster than the vast terrace, was a sculpted yew hedge, with many twigs and shoots out of place and ruffled. In the middle of the hedge was a wicket gate, and beyond the gate were trees, woodland, a forest, the little girls said to themselves.

 “Let’s go into the forest,” said Penny, as though the sentence was required of her. Primrose hesitated. Most of the other children were running up and down the terrace, scuffing their shoes in the gravel. Some boys were kicking a ball on the grass. The sun came right out, full from behind a hazy cloud, and the trees suddenly looked both gleaming and secret. “OK,” said Primrose. “We needn’t go far.” “No. I’ve never been in a forest.” “Nor me.” “We ought to look at it, while we’ve got the opportunity,” said Penny.

"There was a very small child—one of the smallest—whose name, she told everyone, was Alys. With a y, she told those who could spell, and those who couldn’t, which surely included herself. She was barely out of nappies. She was quite extraordinarily pretty, pink and white, with large pale blue eyes, and sparse little golden curls all over her head and neck, through which her pink skin could be seen. Nobody seemed to be in charge of her, no elder brother or sister. She had not quite managed to wash the tearstains from her dimpled cheeks.

"She had made several attempts to attach herself to Penny and Primrose. They did not want her. They were excited about meeting and liking each other. She said now: “I’m coming too, into the forest.” “No, you aren’t,” said Primrose. “You’re too little, you must stay here,” said Penny. “You’ll get lost,” said Primrose. “You won’t get lost. I’ll come with you,” said the little creature, with an engaging smile, made for loving parents and grandparents. “We don’t want you, you see,” said Primrose. “It’s for your own good,” said Penny. Alys went on smiling hopefully, the smile becoming more of a mask. “It will be all right,” said Alys. “Run,” said Primrose. They ran; they ran down the steps and across the lawn, and through the gate, into the forest. They didn’t look back. They were long-legged little girls, not toddlers. The trees were silent round them, holding out their branches to the sun, breathing noiselessly.

"Primrose touched the warm skin of the nearest saplings, taking off her gloves to feel their cracks and knots. She exclaimed over the flaking whiteness and dusty brown of the silver birches, the white leaves of the aspens. Penny looked into the thick of the forest. There was undergrowth— a mat of brambles and bracken. There were no obvious paths. Dark and light came and went, inviting and mysterious, as the wind pushed clouds across the face of the sun. “We have to be careful not to get lost,” she said. “In stories, people make marks on tree-trunks, or unroll a thread, or leave a trail of white pebbles— to find their way back.” “We needn’t go out of sight of the gate,” said Primrose. “We could just explore a little bit."

"They set off, very slowly. They went on tiptoe, making their own narrow passages through the undergrowth, which sometimes came as high as their thin shoulders. They were urban, and unaccustomed to silence. At first the absence of human noise filled them with a kind of awe, as though, while they would not have put it to themselves in this way, they had got to some original place, from which they, or those before them, had come, and which they therefore recognized. Then they began to hear the small sounds that were there. The chatter and repeated lilt and alarm of invisible birds, high up, further in. The hum and buzz of insects. Rustling in dry leaves, rushes of movement in thickets. Slitherings, dry coughs, sharp cracks. They went on, pointing out to each other creepers draped with glistening berries, crimson, black and emerald, little crops of toadstools, some scarlet, some ghostly-pale, some a dead-flesh purple, some like tiny parasols—and some like pieces of meat protruding from tree-trunks. They met blackberries, but didn’t pick them, in case in this place they were dangerous or deceptive. They admired from a safe distance the stiff upright fruiting rods of the Lords and Ladies, packed with fat red berries. They stopped to watch spiders spin, swinging from twig to twig, hauling in their silky cables, reinforcing knots and joinings. They sniffed the air, which was full of a warm mushroom smell, and a damp moss smell, and a sap smell, and a distant hint of dead ashes

"Did they hear it first or smell it first? Both sound and scent were at first infinitesimal and dispersed. Both gave the strange impression of moving in—in waves—from the whole perimeter of the forest. Both increased very slowly in volume, and both were mixed, a sound and a smell fabricated of many disparate sounds and smells. A crunching, a crackling, a crushing, a heavy thumping, combined with threshing and thrashing, and added to that a gulping, heaving, boiling, bursting steaming sound, full of bubbles and farts, piffs and explosions, swallowings and wallowings. The smell was worse, and more aggressive, than the sound. It was a liquid smell of putrefaction, the smell of maggoty things at the bottom of untended dustbins, the smell of blocked drains, and unwashed trousers, mixed with the smell of bad eggs, and of rotten carpets and ancient polluted bedding. The new, ordinary forest smells and sounds, of leaves and humus, fur and feathers, so to speak, went out like lights as the atmosphere of the thing preceded it. The two little girls looked at each other, and took each other’s hand. Speechlessly and instinctively they crouched down behind a fallen tree-trunk, and trembled, as the thing came into view".

(3-14)

A.S. Byatt's Multi-Faceted Dragon.

The idea of an encounter with the Fantastic in the Heart of the Woods is probably one of the oldest tropes in the history of storytelling.  There might even be a case for labeling this particular archetype as one of the prime examples of a form of literary primitivism.  That's because this kind of story has its beginnings roughly at, about, or not long after the beginnings of human civilization.  It's the sort of Myth that humans begin to tell themselves after they've discovered how to make a collective sense of home for themselves in a setting that is otherwise wild and untamed.  This appears to be one of those facts of artistic history that are so fundamental that even an essentially urban fantasist like Peter Straub once began one of many nesting doll narratives tucked within the folds of his 1982 novel Shadowland in the following fashion.  "A long time ago, when we all lived in the forest and none of us lived anywhere else (web)".  In granting those words a strange immortality of their own, all Straub has done is to highlight the primary historical fact that set the conditions and parameters of the first tales ever spun by the first storytellers.  Mankind's initial stories where shaped by our shared environment.  In most cases, those environs were the floor, canopy, glades, and understory of the world's forested sections.  It was here that most of our ancestors had to fight for their very survival on a constant, and daily basis.  In struggling for their very life, the first humans also seem to have found an Inspiration in the woods.

Of course, the great irony of the Forest is that men make their homes out of it, just as much as it serves as a threat or shelter.  It is a setting which contains the promise Fear and Enchantment on an equal basis.  Perhaps this explains the strange dichotomy at the heart of stories dealing with the Fantastic in the Woods.  Even as we began to discover it was possible to live both within and off of the trees, we never seem to have lost that inherent sense of co-mingling duality that marked one of our first homes.  This is something that late Bardolotrist Anne Barton observed in her study, The Shakespearean Forest.  As she liked to point out, "Men and women innocently walking in them, or attempting to journey through to the other side, have never known what they might suddenly meet, whether animal, human or (still worse) a disconcerting mixture of the two (A. S. Byatt’s ‘The Thing in the Forest’, published in 2004 in her Little Black Book of Stories, is yet another variant on the last).  Although woods may continue to shrink and be demolished all over the world, the dread of encounters there with the uncanny or even (as Actaeon discovered long ago, to his cost, when he surprised a goddess bathing) the divine, refuses to go away. In 1999...The Blair Witch Project owed much of its enormous box-office success to the fact that large numbers of cinema-goers believed that what they were watching was a documentary: that all of these horrifying events had really occurred and been clumsily filmed by the young and doomed student researchers investigating supernatural manifestations in the Maryland woods (2)".

It was another English critic (this time long forgotten) by the name of Charles Williams who I think offers the best summation of the intertwining modes of storytelling that make up the Archetypal Forest.  It's no more than a passing comment in a study on Dante, yet it's worth repeating here in full.  "The image of the wood has appeared often enough in English verse.  It has indeed appeared so often that is has gathered a good deal of verse into itself; so that it has become a great forest where, with long leagues of changing green between them, strange episodes of high poetry have place.  Thus in one part there are lovers of a midsummer night, or by day a duke and his followers, and in another men behind branches so that the wood seems moving, and in another a girl separated from her two lordly brothers, and in another a poet listening to a nightingale but rather dreaming richly of the grand art than there exploring it, and there are other inhabitants, belonging even more closely to the wood, dryads, fairies, an enchanter's rout (107)".  It might also be added that here is where you can find a lot of lost children.  One of them is a little girl in a red hood being stalked by animals.  Another are a brother and sister pair who have the bad luck to stumble upon the dwelling of a wicked enchantress who may or might not also be their very own adopted mother, depending on the variation.  Williams continues.

"The forest itself has different names in different tongues - Westermain, Arden, Birnam, Broceliande; and in places there are separate trees named, such as that on the outskirts against which a young Northern poet saw a spectral wanderer leaning, or, in the unexplored centre of which only rumors reach even poetry, Yggdrasil of one myth, or the Trees of Knowledge and Life of another.  So that indeed the whole earth seems to become this one enormous forest, and our longest and most stable civilizations are only clearings in the midst of it (ibid)".  This, then, is the Tradition of which Byatt's story makes up just one expression of Individual Talent.  Even with this knowledge in mind, there's still a further question to be asked.  Which template does her own efforts fit into along the sliding scale between the two poles of Fear and Enchantment?  Well, strange as it may sound, I get the feeling it rests somewhere in a little of both.  Let's start with the most basic and defining fact of this short story.  The plot centers around an encounter that a pair of children have with what we'll call an Agent of the Fantastic, during a chance stroll though the woods.  It's a setup so basic that most us today will have to ask for clarification just to even know which particular fairy tale (ancient or modern) the narrator was even trying to tell us.

We could be dealing with a large handful of protagonists in any number of world famous scenarios.  The one that's most likely to suggest itself to us is that of Hansel and Gretel.  However, what makes it's way into the clearing of Byatt's tale is an interesting sort of compound ghost.  You get the sense there's something familiar about it, even if you've never laid eyes on it before.  You certainly can't forget it once you've seen it.  "Its head appeared to form, or become first visible in the distance, between the trees. Its face—which was triangular—appeared like a rubbery or fleshy mask over a shapeless sprouting bulb of a head, like a monstrous turnip. Its colour was the colour of flayed flesh, pitted with wormholes, and its expression was neither wrath nor greed, but pure misery. Its most defined feature was a vast mouth, pulled down and down at the corners, tight with a kind of pain. Its lips were thin, and raised, like welts from whipstrokes. It had blind, opaque white eyes, fringed with fleshy lashes and brows like the feelers of sea-anemones. Its face was close to the ground, and moved towards the children between its forearms which were squat, thick, powerful and akimbo, like a cross between a monstrous washerwoman and a primeval dragon. The flesh on these forearms was glistening and mottled, every colour, from the green of mould to the red brown of raw liver, to the dirty white of dry rot.

"The rest of its very large body appeared to be glued together, like still wet papier-mâché, or the carapace of stones and straws and twigs worn by caddis-flies underwater. It had a tubular shape, as a turd has a tubular shape, a provisional amalgam. It was made of rank meat, and decaying vegetation, but it also trailed veils and prostheses of man-made materials, bits of wire netting, foul dishcloths, wire-wool full of pan scrubbings, rusty nuts and bolts. It had feeble stubs and stumps of very slender legs, growing out of it at all angles, wavering and rippling like the suckered feet of a caterpillar or the squirming fringe of a centipede. On and on it came, bending and crushing whatever lay in its path, including bushes, though not substantial trees, which it wound between, awkwardly. The little girls observed, with horrified fascination, that when it met a sharp stone, or a narrow tree-trunk, it allowed itself to be sliced through, flowed sluggishly round in two or three smaller worms, convulsed and reunited. Its progress was achingly slow, very smelly, and apparently very painful, for it moaned and whined amongst its other burblings and belchings. They thought it could not see, or certainly could not see clearly. It and its stench passed within a few feet of their tree-trunk, humping along, leaving behind it a trail of bloody slime and dead foliage, sucked to dry skeletons.

"Its end was flat and blunt, almost transparent, like some earthworms. When it had gone, Penny and Primrose, kneeling on the moss and dead leaves, put their arms about each other, and hugged each other, shaking with dry sobs. Then they stood up, still silent, and stared together, hand in hand, at the trail of obliteration and destruction, which wound out of the forest and into it again. They went back, hand in hand, without looking behind them, afraid that the wicket-gate, the lawn, the stone steps, the balustrade, the terrace and the great house would be transmogrified, or simply not there. But the boys were still playing football on the lawn, a group of girls were skipping and singing shrilly on the gravel. They let go each other’s hand, and went back in.  They did not speak to each other again (14-16)".  Now, I think I have a good idea of what most us reading this for the first time will be thinking.  "Holy shit, it's John Carpenter's The Thing!  Run!  Get a flamethrower!  Kill it!  Kill it with fire"!  The reason I'm able to assume this will be one of our go-to reaction for the image Byatt's Imagination has provided for us is because, at the end of the day, all of the stock responses we might have to any given work of fiction are determined for the most part by what we know from whatever other forms of media entertainment we consume.  Also, you've got to admit, that's an eerily accurate description for Carpenter's semi-Lovecraftian version of E.T.  Recall that I also said that there was something familiar about it as well.

Let me explain what I mean by asking a question.  While most of us found our minds rummaging through whatever bits and detritus of remembered pop culture might still be lying around in our mental attic spaces, how many at the same time we're busy thinking, "Where have I seen that before"?  I can't say how many of us fit that description.  However, for those who do, my advice would be to not ignore an idea like that.  It can be a useful response sometimes; indicating that we've either remembered some vital piece of past information that can help to make sense of what we're reading or watching in the present, or else its the promptings of the kind of open-minded curiosity to explore the meanings of the stories we like.  That's the sort of thing which can end up as one hell of a benefit even outside the realm of literature.  In terms of Byatt's story, my own response seems to have been a mixture of the two.  I remember being impressed at the writer's skill in being able to tap into whatever level of the Imagination it is that can conjure up that level of literate grotesquerie.  On a sheer emotional level, Byatt seems to have wedded the lowest and highest levels of Stephen King's hierarchy of reactions elicited by the Gothic genre.  This creature combines the Gross-out with a genuine artistic Terror.


At the same time, while all that was going on, I also recall wondering if this was something I'd either seen or heard mentioned somewhere in any other possible story I'd read or watched.  This creeping sense of the familiar was enhanced when, much like the work of King, the two child protagonists meet up together once again, this time as adults.  Each of them is haunted by the glimpse they caught of that "Whatever It Was" they saw in the forest, and the trauma of that encounter is basically what drives them back to the castle where they were more or less billeted during the War.  When Penny and Prim make their way to the castle by the forest, they discover "a medieval-looking illustrated book. Primrose thought it was a very old book. Penny assumed it was nineteenth-century mock-medieval. It showed a knight, on foot, in a forest, lifting his sword to slay something. The knight shone on the rounded slope of the page, in the light, which caught the gilding on his helmet and sword-belt. It was not possible to see what was being slain. This was because, both in the tangled vegetation of the image, and in the way the book was displayed in the case, the enemy, or victim, was in shadows".

"Neither of them could read the ancient (or pseudo-ancient) black letter of the text beside the illustration. There was a typed explanation, or description, under the book, done with a faded ribbon and uneven pressure of the keys. They had to lean forward to read it, and to see what was worming its way into, or out of, the deep spine of the book, and that was how they came to see each other’s face, close up, in the glass which was both transparent and reflective. Their transparent reflected faces lost detail —cracked lipstick, pouches, fine lines of wrinkles—and looked both younger and greyer, less substantial. And that is how they came to recognise each other, as they might not have done, plump face to bony face. They breathed each other’s names, Penny, Primrose, and their breath misted the glass, obscuring the knight and his opponent. I could have died, I could have wet my knickers, said Penny and Primrose afterwards to each other, and both experienced this still moment as pure, dangerous shock. 

"But they stayed there, bent heads together, legs trembling, knees knocking, and read the caption, which was about the Loathly Worm, which, tradition held, had infested the countryside and had been killed more than once by scions of that house, Sir Lionel, Sir Boris, Sir Guillem. The Worm, the typewriter had tapped out, was an English Worm, not a European dragon, and like most such worms, was wingless. In some sightings it was reported as having vestigial legs, hands or feet. In others it was limbless. It had, in monstrous form, the capacity of common or garden worms to sprout new heads or trunks if it was divided, so that two worms, or more, replaced one. This was why it had been killed so often, yet reappeared. It had been reported travelling with a slithering pack of young ones, but these may have been only revitalized segments. The typed paper was held down with drawing pins and appeared to continue somewhere else, on some not visible page, not presented for viewing (21-22)".  It's one of those rare passages in a story of this type where the author seems willing to dole out some form of background information about the Fantastic element at the heart of it's mythological narrative.  Based on what the story tells us, there are two sets of reactions that are available to the reader at this point.

The first one will seem obvious, and I agree, it would be interesting to see if you could take the premise of John Carpenter's The Thing and see if it could work in a medieval setting.  The second kind of reaction, which is the one I went with was, again, to swear I'd heard of this story somewhere once before.  What it reminded me of in particular was this Old English legend I'd heard about in connection with the Lewis Carroll poem known as Jabberwocky.  It must have been something I'd read in an online article somewhere about the influences or literary predecessors that made up the ingredients of one of the few examples of 19th century poetry that most of us still have tucked away somewhere in the back of our heads.  The piece of folklore that I read about concerned a creature known as the Lambton Worm.  So I looked it up, and in doing so, the first thing even the casual reader is struck by is the remarkable level of shared similarities the legend has with the title creature at the heart of Byatt's short story.  "The story revolves around John Lambton, an heir of the Lambton Estate, County Durham (in ceremonial Tyne and Wear), and his battle with a giant worm (dragon) that had been terrorizing the local villages (web)".  All we're dealing with, then, is the typical hero slays dragon trope of Fantasy.

It's when you dig into the details that the correspondences between the Lambton myth and Byatt's forest dwelling monstrosity begin to jump out at you.  For instance, the legend recounts that, much like with Penny and Prim's Loathly Thing, "A number of brave villagers try to kill the beast, but are quickly dispatched. When a chunk is cut off the worm, it simply reattaches the missing piece. Visiting knights also try to assault the beast, but none survive. When annoyed, the worm uproots trees by coiling its tail around them, then creates devastation by waving around the uprooted trees like a club (ibid)".  One almost begins to wonder if some of the knights who took on the Wyrm (to give it the proper Tolkien phrase) were ever named Lionel, Boris, or Guillem.  As I've said, it would be neat to see what John Carpenter could do with a scenario like that.  In the meantime, what Byatt does with this borrowed material is interesting.  It's here that we as readers are left to consider the implications and even possible symbolism of the Thing, or rather the meaning of the Wyrm.  To start with, I almost wonder if someone like J.R.R. Tolkien can be of assistance here.  The reason why is because of the unique properties of Byatt's Thing.  It's labeled a Worm, yet it's descriptions and motifs all match up with the lore of Dragons, and of one local dragon legend in particular.  Hence, the more proper terminology of Wyrm.

The word itself was used interchangeably to describe the Fire Drakes and their ways.  And in her short story we see the writer borrowing heavily from the lore of these beasts for the purposes of her own creature.  So this begs a question in my mind.  Is it right to call Byatt's Loathly Worm a Wyrm?  Even if we consent to go with this view of things, it's clear that nothing about this creature fits the ordinary description of a typical dragon.  We may be given the faintest hint of scales, yet it's complete appearance is more akin to something out of Clark Ashton Smith, rather than Tolkien or Spenser.  Let's be honest.  If I hadn't uncovered all the connections between Byatt's Thing and the Lambton Worm, would we even be discussing this beast in terms of dragon lore?  With all these details in mind, it soon becomes clear that the author is alerting her readers to a very specific and outré example of the legendary fire breathers.  This is an incarnation of the trope with borrowings from Medieval ideas of giant snakes such as the Basilisk, or the Midgard Serpent spliced together with the figure of the Hydra, the many headed monster of Greek myth that was almost impossible to kill, because every time one head was chopped off, another would simply grow in it's place.  Byatt has taken and melded each of these variations together. 

The final result of placing all of these different myths of the dragon together in her own mental blender is one that goes a long way toward playing up the nightmarish aspects of the legend.  If it makes any sense to label Byatt's Worm as a dragon, then it's the sort of serpent that is designed to evoke the sense of revulsion and dread that the archetype was capable of inspiring.  We tend to view the Fire Drake as this figure of awesome power and strength, something that's capable of approaching, and even containing its own sense of majesty.  A lot of the reason for that is pretty obvious.  Dragons are pretty darn awesome when you get right down to it, pure and simple.  It's the same reason the T-Rex is viewed as the King of the Dinosaurs.  Tolkien used to speak of the fascination of the Wyrm, and that's what all this amounts to.  There's the same, brilliant idea of magnificence to had in the idea of the dragon that we tend to find in certain real life animals such as the lion.  Indeed, it gets even richer when you stop and realize that it was probably the Europeans first ever glimpses of the King Cat that gave us the myth of the Manticore.  In the same way, Tolkien theorized that it was the uncovering of dinosaur fossils during the ages of Chaucer, Shakespeare, and the Beowulf Poet that created the concept of the flying dragon.

Think about what would happen if a Medieval peasant were to stumble upon the bones of a Rex, a Hassiophis, a Pterodactyl, or even a Titanoboa.  They've never seen anything like this in their lives, and yet such remains keep cropping up everywhere as far as Ancient Greece.  With little to no knowledge of the sciences, except for within the cloisters, or the universities, combined with a general understanding of the globe and its history that was a lot more parochial than it is now, it's easy to see how our ancestors could begin to imagine the great grand descendants of birds and lizards as mighty giants that once had the skies and seas for their dominion.  Byatt's globular, wingless serpent can then be spoken of as fitting within this imaginary lineage, especially considering that we've uncovered the remains of actual giant freaking snakes from the planet's prehistoric past!  Perhaps it was even the discovery of just such a fossil within the grounds that are now the Lambton Estates which gave rise to the myth of the local Wyrm.  Even if all this is plausible, the fact remains that Byatt's tale chooses to forgoe all the usual responses of might, awe, and wonder that such creatures can inspire.  Rather than focus on the inherent sense of enchantment, the story fossil that Byatt has to work with chooses to highlight the negative flipside of this archetype.  Instead, the story zeros in on the aspect of fear, dread, and threat.

This was the second type of stock response that the image of the dragon could invoke in its audience.  All Byatt does here is take that note of dread, and heighten it up to levels that Lovecraft would have been proud of.  Dragons can be fearsome as well as majestic, and here that Gothic note is taken about as far I think I've ever seen any writer go with it.  If I am unable to grant Byatt any points for originality, she definitely earns the prize for turning the dragon archetype into a genuine figure of fear.  The question now becomes why does she do this?  What purpose could there be in taking the dragon myth, and turning it into this nightmare straight out of a film by Carpenter or Stuart Gordon?  A lot of the answers to that seems to lie in the kind of themes the story is after.  The playwright and novelist Thornton Wilder once claimed that "Art is confession", that all storytelling amounts to little more than "the secret told".  It's a maxim that other artists like James Baldwin were inclined to agree with, and I think that's the main purpose here behind the dragon at the heart of Byatt's tale.  It's here to make a confession, of sorts.  The question is what's the nature of the secret that the Wyrm has to tell us?

Conclusion: A Story (and a Life) that Hovers between Fear and Longing.

In all this discussion of the elements of Byatt's story, there's one aspect of things I haven't really brought up yet.  That would be the life of the author herself, and what, if anything, drew her to these kind of genre-hopping tales of enchantment?  The funny thing is how once you do a bit of digging, it does become possible to see why she would return to any story having to do with the Fantastic, in various shapes and forms.  It also leads us to the author's own, very uneasy relationship with the fairy tale and its plethora of tropes.  Odd as it may sound, when I read up on Byatt's life story, the one recurrent constant note about it that sticks out to me is this peculiar see-saw rhythm of her relationship to the art of writing, and in particular with its connection to literary Fantasy.  It's as if the writer harbored some undisclosed sense of distrust of the Fantastic genres, and hence of her own skills within that specific medium of creativity.  At the same time, there's the impression that the artist knows its something she can't seem to do without.  It's a very peculiar setup to find yourself confronted with, whether as a reader, or a writer.  It makes Byatt stick out like a sore thumb in a field of other authors who were able to enjoy a more easy-going and natural relationship with their own creative merits, and whichever popular genres were able to bring out their best artistic strengths.  Byatt never seemed to enjoy all of that.

I never get the sense that she could enjoy her work the way others she admired, such as Tolkien, were able to do.  When you read anything from the creator of Hobbits, even if it's just a series of discarded, collected rough drafts, odds are even you'll soon find yourself caught up in the simple pleasure that comes from the artist being able to tap into their own creativity.  Tolkien had that capability in spades, and it's that sense of enjoyment that the author derives from the sheer act of secondary creation that accounts for a perhaps unrecognized, yet genuine part of why we're drawn to his narrative efforts, and why he always somehow knows how to leave us wanting more.  Byatt never seems to have had that kind of easy sense of union with her own Imagination.  I get the impression I'm dealing with someone who might have been able to go there, like Tolkien did, it's just that there was always this idea of, was it doubt, fear, or some other sense of shortcoming, whether personal, or otherwise, that made it difficult for Byatt to take a bit of joy in the work of creativity?  Well, I think I found the answer to all of that.  A lot of it seems to be rooted in the author's biography, and if I had to find the right words to describe what can be a very delicate subject, than I guess I'd have to describe her life as a Dickensian novel.

A.S. Byatt was born Antonia Susan Duffy to John Frederick Drabble, a barrister, and Kathleen Bloor, a former scholar on the works of Robert Browning.  She also had a younger sister turned future novelist who is still known as Margaret Drabble.  When it comes to the childhood that the two literary siblings shared together, each hints at a less than rosy picture.  While Margaret Drabble paints a loving portrait of her dad in a 2008 issue of the Guardian, calling him "(An) an extraordinarily fair-minded, generous-spirited man, (web)", her older sister Susan, in a later issue of the same online journal tells us she was  "a deeply unhappy child," she says. "I didn't like being one. It seemed a horrible thing to have to be.  Byatt grew up in York, the oldest of four children in a clever, competitive household (her sister is Margaret Drabble; they don't get on, and she's fed up of being asked about it - as I was twice warned before going to see her). Her father, John Drabble, was a county court judge and her mother was a scholar of Browning who felt trapped as a housewife. "My poor little mother," says Byatt, almost to herself. "She shouted and shouted and shouted.  One of the characters in her...novel, The Children's Book, she says, "represents my greatest terror which is simple domesticity." Greatest terror? She says, decisively: "Yes. I had this image of coming out from under and seeing the light for a bit and then being shut in a kitchen, which I think happened to women of my generation (web)". 

It's a picture of a house divided in some fundamental way.  There seems to have been enough dysfunction present, at any rate, to have left one of those negative impressions of life that can be defining, so long as the parents aren't careful of what they're doing.  It sounds like that was very much the case Susan Drabble's parents.  The bitter note of rivalry between the young Antonia Drabble and her younger sister seems to indicate a family dynamic in which Margaret wound up as the family favorite, while little Susan was more or less forced to live in the shadow of the designated household golden child.  In other words, for Byatt, it was as if Mozart and Salieri were born into the same family, and yet still maintained the same level of bitter competition.  The only difference was this time it was for real, yet a lot less fatal.  To hear Byatt tell it, she's one of the few women out there to know what it's like to be fitted for the role of Cinderella outside the confines of a story.  The major difference is this time there was no handsome prince to come riding to her rescue.  No glass slipper, either.  Just a number of formative years in which she claims to have been made the into the family's chosen black sheep. 

It's the kind of childhood that no young girl should ever have to be put through, considering the kind of damage that can do on a young psyche.  It made being just a kid the sort of place that was always better to come from than to go back to so far as Antonia Susan Drabble was concerned.  The one solace left to the young girl during what appears to have been a troubled and troubling time for her were the stories she read through in various works of Fantasy.  At the same time, unlike Tolkien, an almost nonexistent childhood composed in the main of neglect (if never any discernable, outright physical abuse) left her with a "well bred" tendency to skepticism and distrust, even, it seems, with any possible offerings of genuine comfort and solace, whether from stories or other people.  It's an outlook Susan took with her all the way to Cambridge University, where she came under the wing of F.R. Leavis.  The best way to describe this gentleman is to call him a tenured literary critic and lecturer in English 101 at a University level.  The fact that his name is unfamiliar now is a pretty good testament to whatever legacy he may have left behind.  F.R. Leavis is a prime example of someone who is won over by the Mythical Modernism of T.S. Eliot, and yet who is unwilling to share that poet's sense of self-awareness, coupled with the kind of humility that is always willing to have his mind changed on a lot of important matters.

Leavis was basically this living example of how to take a flesh and blood human being and transform him into a collection of the worst kind of outworn academic cliches you can imagine.  If Leavis is known for anything at all, nowadays, it's for his complete and total dismissal of the value of the Popular Arts and their Genres.  He was the kind of guy who might be willing to sing the praises of a new poet like Dylan Thomas, all while never being able to see the value of a simple short story by the likes of Ray Bradbury or even Jorge Luis Borges.  There's also the subtle hint that he wouldn't have liked Jimi Hendrix because of his music, or Toni Morrison for her own flights of literate Fantasy.  A good beginner's summation of the inherent problems with Leavis and his critical views can be found in this handy online article by David Stubbs.  The author who would become A.S. Byatt was one of the many pupils whom Leavis took under his wing.  It could almost be looked at as an example of a neglected child escaping from one trap, only for years of abuse to cause her to fall into yet another, similar one.  To her credit, Byatt seemed to recognize the problematic aspects of Leavis's thinking, even if she never seems to have gone as far as Stubbs in her thinking.  Still, as Alexandra Cheira's essay on the matter points out, Susan was smart enough to never make a total commitment to Leavis's critical theories.

Part of what might have helped her steer clear of such a close-minded approach to literature was her growing love for the poetry of William Wordsworth, and Samuel Taylor Coleridge.  These two seem to have amounted to the best twin influences that the writer ever encountered in her life.  They were like an oasis of nourishment for Susan in an otherwise dry and barren personal waste that someone like T.S. Eliot would have recognized all too well.  It seems to have been the artistry of Wordsworth and Coleridge together who kept alive that same Imaginative spark that allowed Susan the ability to enjoy the tales of once upon a time that she used to turn to for solace as a child.  It's not too surprising if you realize that all the poems of the Lake Poets amount to a collection of fairy tales for adults told in verse.  If these are the two good halves of her life, then to her credit, Susan Drabble somehow managed to hold on to them, even when coming under an less than helpful influence such as that of Leavis.  After she'd graduated from Cambridge, Antonia Susan Drabble married her first husband, and kept his own name of Byatt for herself the rest of her days.  She also began to find a voice for herself as a creative novelist.  If there's anything like an appreciable irony to that voice, it's that we find the author in an almost constant state of internal struggle.  A lot of Byatt's novels are like an ongoing back and forth game of see-saw.

To read just about any of her books is to catch of a glimpse of the novelist trying to decide where she belongs in the grand scheme of things.  Now, to be fair, this in and of itself, doesn't have to be any problem whatsoever.  Indeed, there have been actual times in real life when this question of "Where do I fit in?" has been an essential path for women to gain their own bearings.  In many cases, the outcomes of this inner searching has been all to the good.  That's about as much of a problem as being able to breath clean oxygen.  The trouble only comes in when the woman in question can be qualified as the product of an abusive and broken household.  That's when the usual slew of horror stories begin.  There's little need to go through such a catalogue, it's same gut churning stories of heartache and mistreatment.  Did you ever notice how that stuff tends to fall into repeating patterns?  It's got to say something about human nature.  The only reason I can have for pointing that out is maybe to offer some small bit of hope.  Maybe the regularity and cyclical nature of abuse holds a key to its cure, in some fashion.  I don't know.  What I am willing to hazard as an educated guess about Byatt's place in all this is fourfold.  1. It's possible to describe her as the victim of an abusive household.  2. The nature of this abuse was emotional, and not physical.  Her parents neglected her for the sake of her younger sibling, Margaret Drabble, and this neglect, in turn, nursed a lifelong inferiority complex that the author seems to have carried with her all her days.  Sometimes abuse leaves scars that are visible only on the inside.

It was books, novels, stories, and storytelling in general that acted as a refuge and safe space for Susan in what was otherwise a very trying, difficult, and lonely childhood.  In particular, she seems to have been naturally drawn to the realm of Fairy Tales and narratives of the Fantastic.  4. This literary place of refuge was also something that she held a lifelong ambivalence toward.  The reason for this last point is simple enough.  Margaret Drabble told interviewers of how she and her sister, Susan grew in a very literate household.  Both of their parents were well read, with the girls' mother being a former Poetry scholar.  Sometimes this can be the best gift any parent is able to give their kids.  A well read home, the kind of place where one of the rooms in the house is always set aside for a collection of the owner's favorite books, can sometimes turn into the kind of gateway that allows any child of the house to become a more decent and empathetic human being.  The personal trajectory of writers like Tolkien and Edith Nesbit (one of Byatt's personal inspirations) are two neat demonstrations of what might be termed the best case scenario with this setup.  Both grew up in literate and artistic households, and later on, each writer used those memories of the stories they loved to help them write their ways out of their own personal crisis, and give the world a new image and vocabulary for the literature of the Fantastic.

The fact that Nesbit and Tolkien are two names from a bygone era that are still held in reverence today is a good sample of what the best possible outcome of a literary childhood can be like.  Under other circumstances, it's just possible that Susan might have been able to enjoy this kind of existence as well.  The Drabble family was a literate one, yet it was also high-strung, and neurotic.  It meant growing up in a mental atmosphere where the ability to get the full immersive sense of joy that comes from a good book, the way that Tolkien and Edith had, was always a step too far for either Byatt's parents, and, to an unfortunate extent, their eldest daughter.  They kept letting matters of crippled egos get in the way of a complete enjoyment and contemplation of the stories they loved.  Byatt, to her credit, seems to have recognized this on some level, and yet even then she found it a difficult toxic behavioral pattern to break away from.  In terms of how this upbringing affected her literary judgments, she seems to have been prone to second-guessing herself.  She would possess the ability to judge the artistic quality and merits of a book like Lord of the Rings, and yet she would then, in the same breath, turn right around and become automatically suspicious of any story that she wound up liking.  This is also yet another repeating pattern to be found in both her fiction and literary criticism.  It's an unfortunate, yet informative example of the critic, writer, and reader caught up in a neurotic pattern of behavior.

Because of her troubled upbringing, Byatt found it very difficult to shed a lifetime's worth of anxieties that were instilled in her by her parents.  It meant that she tended to approach even the stories she loved with a frustrating sense of suspicion.  The worst part about that is, the more she loved a book, the longer her tendency to see it like a skeptical race track tout eyeing a champion horse under the reservation that she could always be dealing with nothing more than phony thoroughbred.  To be fair, a level headed approach to examining stories will always be warranted.  However, to approach the art of Good Reading through such a narrow, obsessive-compulsive lens goes a long way toward helping both the amateur and professional critic to miss wide of the mark.  That's the kind of outlook that kills both Art and it's legitimate criticism right then and there in the crib, before either aspect ever has an honest chance to show their wears.  I'm sorry, but there's no way any of that can ever work as a justifiable approach to reading or writing stories.  It can't be done.  The whole thing proves unworkable sooner or later.

Like I said, though, and to her credit, this was a problem that Byatt was always aware of.  For every time she let this personal handicap get the better of her critical judgment calls, there were other times when it's clear she's making an effort to keep a clear head in what she's either reading or writing.  The good news is this is very much the case with The Thing in the Forest.  Her narration is clean, crisp, and possessed of that particular spartan quality that is the sign of a writer with a clear grasp of what the narrative requires in order to get its maximum effect across.   Just go back and read the author's description of the title character as it makes its blundering way through the story, and you'll be greeted by one of the most well made passages of pure revolted Horror within the history of the Gothic genre.  It's a tour de force in its own right, and I am tempted to wonder if it might be the best thing Byatt ever wrote (and trust me, there's a line that's going to get me in trouble with a lot of her old school fans).  Whatever the case, it's clear we're dealing the work of a writer operating at the top of her game.  The story checks all the marks in terms of building suspense, holding the narrative tension steady once it's time for it to appear on-stage, and best of all, for being able to spin a fairy tale in the Gothic mode.

The only question that remains to ask is a simple one.  What does the story even mean, or what's it trying to do?  Well, I've arrived at an answer to that.  I'm just not sure how strange it's going to sound.  For me, the whole premise of the tale reminded me of Lovecraft, though not in the way you might be thinking. I never get the vibe I'm dealing with a story of cosmic horror here.  When it comes to the lore of the story, all the relevant background material both the reader and characters are given points more in the direction of this quasi-Chaucerian-Spenserian mythography, rather than anywhere near the Plains of Leng.  Say sorry, but a I just don't get the impression that Byatt is interested in treading that kind of ground, and it's not where her story is headed.  Nonetheless, a lot of it reminds me of something to do with the scribbler from Providence.  The way Byatt's story does that is through an odd level of couched, psychological autobiography that the tale of the Lambton Loathly Wyrm has about it.  It gibes with a reading I've seen applied to one of HPL's own efforts.  I'm thinking specifically now of how critics have described "The Dunwich Horror" as an example of the American author making an indirect confession of how he felt or viewed himself and his troubled family as this collection of internal monstrosities. 

In his edited anthology The Dunwich Cycle, Mythos enthusiast Robert M. Price points out how one aspect of the Cyclopean short story mentioned above is that one of it's main characters functions "in many ways as a Lovecraftian autobiographical analogue.  Wilbur's being raised by his grandfather instead of a father, his home education from his grandfather's library, his insane mother, his stigma of ugliness (in Lovecraft's case untrue, but a self-image imposed on him by his mother), and his sense of being an outsider all echo Lovecraft himself.  Many similar features can be seen in the figures of Charles Dexter Ward, Jervis Dudley...in "The Tomb", Edward Derby in "The Thing on the Doorstep", Randolph Carter in "The Silver Key", and Ward Phillips in "Through the Gates of the Silver Key (236)".  Price then gives his readers a key bit of information which I argue can help us unlock the meaning of Byatt's otherwise unconnected fairy tale for grown-ups.  Of each character mentioned in the quoted passage just above, Price concludes that, "They are all in some measure Lovecraft and thus they are all one in some manner each (ibid)".  I don't know how crazy this may sound, yet I'm going to go out on a limb here with the suggestion that the same rubric applies to the four main leads of little Susie Drabble's short story.

In other words, I think the best way to make sense of the meaning of this text is to view it through the same autobiographic-allegorical lens that Price applies to Lovecraft.  The only major difference is that Byatt's Thing can't claim any familial relations with the creatures inhabiting the pages of the Necronomicon.  Instead, it belongs more to the various levels of dragon lore that dot the author's native, British landscape.  Much like the protagonists, and perhaps even some of the otherworldly villains from Lovecraft's corpus (an here I am thinking of stories like "The Outsider", which, I'd argue, has a similar autobiographical slant) we're dealing with a case in which a semi-biographic reading of the the story's Horror puts its entire nature into a proper perspective.  I've read papers, and other essays that argue the presence of Byatt's creature is meant to act as a commentary upon the trauma suffered by British survivors of the Second World War.  It's possible to agree with a lot of these readings up to a point, however the narrative continues on from there all the way to a moment when it's clear that the traumas of that conflict have all but vanished from living memory.  This is driven home by the fact that when Penny and Primrose, the story's two main leads, visit the castle where they saw the Thing as kids, they're surprised to discover that no record of their visit as evacuees is part of the site's history.

I agree with those scholars who point out that this could be a case of the writer subtly bending the lines between truth and reality within the confines of her secondary world.  It begins to raise a note of doubt in minds of both readers, and Byatt's make-believe heroines.  This creeping sense of disbelief raises a number of possibilities that are both frightening and a relief at the same time.  It begins to leave room open for the idea that maybe one or both women only imagined that they saw some horrible, snake-like thing in the woods behind the grounds of an old castle when they were young.  It's a comforting in the sense that it might lift one burden off their shoulders.  The sense of unease comes from wondering what it means that both girls saw it at the same time, even if it was just an illusion?  A sudden case of Folie a Deux?  A momentary lapse of reason shared by two?  A collective hallucination brought on by the strains and anxieties of war?  Are such things even possible?  These are all the questions that Byatt's prose starts off dancing around in our minds until we come to the page about the Loathly Worm, and both readers and main characters realize it wasn't a hallucination, but a case of myth and legend being little more than a case of stone-cold, albeit grotesque and inexplicable facts of the world they're in.

From that point on, the narrative is taken up with the ways in which Penny and Prim respond to their sudden encounter with the Fantastic.  What's interesting to me about the conclusion that's reached is the inescapable impression that some sort of moral judgment call is being made and carried out.  There's the lingering suggestion of an ethical boundary that's been trespassed in some way.  I'm not sure it's a matter of the main cast seeing something they shouldn't have.  Instead, it all seems to come down to the manner in which each young girl lets this newfound instant of knowledge determine the woman they both grow up to be.  It's something that the narrative is at pains to draw our attention to.  Byatt devotes a great deal of ink to what becomes of the story's two leads.  We learn how "After the war, their fates were still similar and dissimilar. Penny’s widowed mother embraced grief, closed her face and her curtains, moved stiffly, like an automat, and read poetry. Primrose’s mother married one of the many admirers, visitors, dancing partners she had had before the ship went down, gave birth to another five children, and developed varicose veins and a smoker’s cough. She dyed her blonde hair with peroxide when it faded. Both Primrose and Penny were only children who now, because of the war, lived in amputated or unreal families. Penny developed crushes on poetical teachers and in due course—she was clever—went to university, where she chose to study developmental psychology. Primrose had little education. She was always being kept off school to look after the others.

"She too dyed her blonde curls with peroxide when they turned mousy and faded. She got fat as Penny got thin. Neither of them married. Penny became a child psychologist, working with the abused, the displaced, the disturbed. Primrose did this and that. She was a barmaid. She worked in a shop. She went to help at various church crèches and Salvation Army reunions, and discovered she had a talent for story-telling. She became Aunty Primrose, with her own repertoire. She was employed to tell tales to kindergartens and entertain at children’s parties. She was much in demand at Hallowe’en, and had her own circle of bright yellow plastic chairs in a local shopping mall, where she kept an eye on the children of burdened women, keeping them safe, offering them just a frisson of fear and terror that made them wriggle with pleasure (18-19)"  There is the subtlest hint of an autobiographical tinge to these words.  It's not anything like a complete and direct one-for-one correspondence.  Rather, the sense that what we're reading amounts to a form of confession couched as narration can be seen in a handful of details, combined with overall tone of the passage.  Like Penny, there is a sense in which Byatt belonged to an "unreal family" when her own parents liked her sister Margaret as their favorite.

Penny also attended University like her author, though unlike the women of paper and ink, Byatt never studied for courses as a psychologist that I'm aware of.  She always seems to have been making her way with a clear eye on the goal of becoming a fiction writer.  At the same time, there is the notion that Penny is meant to contain a lot of the same mental compost heap as that of her creator.  Like Byatt, she's a woman of considerable talent who is nonetheless hampered by a sense of inadequacy born of childhood trauma.  That's an important plot point to note, because in real life, there's only a handful of  ways that can come about, and one of them is through adverse circumstances stemming mainly from parental abuse or neglect, as was the latter case with Byatt's nonexistent childhood.  What makes this information crucial is that we see the author applying her own inner turmoil onto an imaginary creature of such a fantastical nature, that it's more or less absurd to to view how its appearance effects the lives of its two witnesses.  Even if we allow for the possibility of such a sighting to be traumatic, the fact remains that they've just witnessed proof that they are both living in a world of magic and miracles.  Their entire life is a place in which creatures and incidents from ancient myth and legend are, by and large, very real.  Such a sighting would be enough to upend a person's entire conception of the very Earth they stand upon.  Such a revelation would have a bigger reaction than with Byatt's characters.

To give an idea of what I mean about how such a thing would play out in real life, imagine if NASA started receiving broadcast signals of unknown origin from somewhere in the depths of space.  Suppose these hypothetical signals were of such a nature that they repeated at intervals too artificial to be called merely natural.  Also that when put through a computer, these sounds could be translated into some form of actual words, and those words made up a greeting!  When I try to think of how I might respond to such a revelation, all I can imagine is myself just sat limp at my writing desk staring at the very laptop I'm using to write these words in a state of mind that's somewhere between literal slack-jawed wonder, and a gnawing sense of unease ready to shade at any moment into panic.  Part of me would want to burst out of my chair with excitement at the thought that we were not the only intelligent species in the universe.  Part of that excitement would stem from the fact that from this point onwards, everything (and I mean everything) would have changed.  Not just mankind's knowledge of the cosmos, but also of our own place and nature within it.  From there, the mind would almost have to hit a blank wall at the possibilities that such a discovery would open up to us as a species.  The other part of my mind, the one at the basement level where all the alligators, and apes live, would go as follows.

First, after my initial reaction of wonder had run its course, then it wouldn't surprise me for a train of thought that goes as follows to start running through my head.  "Wait, how do we now these "messengers" are friendly?  Are they just like us?  Are they smarter than us?  Is that a good or a bad thing, either way?  What kind of ethical conundrums could this create on the part of either party?  What do they even look like?  Are they "easy on the eyes"?  Would they take some getting used to?  Or would they look like the worst creatures out of a storybook?...Don't do or be anything too weird, okay"?!?!  Here you have the closest I can't get to a sense of how a normal, real life human reaction would sound like in cases like the one that greets our two young leads in the forest behind an old, Medieval castle.  Whatever such a reaction could entail, I guarantee you it wouldn't come off sounding like snippets of scattered episodes from a bloody soap opera, for frak's sake.  That kind of fallout just wouldn't happen in real life.  However, its what comes about in the course of Byatt's narrative.  Rather than her main cast acting out in a manner appropriate to such an encounter, we seem them behaving like characters in a drawing room drama.  It's a lot less like characters who have had a remarkable encounter with a mythic creature, and more like to sort of actions would see on series like Peyton Place, or Coronation Street.

This in itself is a very subtle hint at the inherent artificiality of Susan's story.  Her character's can't quite match up to how someone would react to such a situation in real life.  If we go with the idea that these figures all mean to stand for autobiographical aspects of the author's own life and mind, however, then it is possible to claim that the events of the narrative make a certain amount of sense.  In particular, it helps to explain the meaning of the story's ending.  It centers around how the two girls finally decide to come to grips with the nature of their encounter.  Penny decides on a course in psychology, which might make a bit of sense so long as the aim is to try and find a way that will allow her to process the idea that she lives in a world of Dungeons and Dragons leftovers.  Instead, the truth turns out to be as follows: 

"She had become a psychotherapist “to be useful.” That was not quite accurate or sufficient as an explanation. The corner of the blanket that covered the unthinkable had been turned back enough for her to catch sight of it. She was in its world. It was not by accident that she had come to specialize in severely autistic children, children who twittered, or banged, or stared, who sat damp and absent on Penny’s official lap and told her no dreams, discussed no projects. The world they knew was a real world. Often Penny thought it was the real world, from which even their desperate parents were at least partly shielded. Somebody had to occupy themselves with the hopeless. Penny felt she could. Most people couldn’t. She could (38)".  The major problem with this strategy is that it's just a dodge to help her avoid the crux of the problem, instead of confronting it.  It's as if the author has paused in the middle of her artifice in order to introduce a surprising moment of reality into the proceedings.  This is more in keeping with what a natural response to such an event would be like.  At the same time, it's just a failed attempt to run away, and sooner or later, as is expected in this kind of fairy tale, the hero must have their confrontation with the dragon.  I'm not going to spoil the ending for the reader.  The best you're going to get out of me is to recall that old Robert Frost poem about two roads diverged in a yellow wood.  Only one road remains untaken, and that's the one that makes a world of difference.

It's a satisfying enough denouement, yet it's also the kind of ending that leaves the audience asking a lot of questions, not in terms of what ends up happening to the characters, so much as the meaning of how things turn out.  I've said that a symbolic, autobiographical approach is the one that allows the story to make the most sense, and that still holds true now.  In the final analysis, I'd have to say that what I've been looking at this whole time is the author separating out the various aspects of her mind.  There's the analytical, rational, topmost part of her psyche, the part of Byatt's conscious thinking which finds itself more at home in the literary school of thinkers like F.R. Leavis, even as she has misgivings about the value of his judgments.  This is the aspect of her mind that is represented the character of Penny, who at least "tries" to make an effort to always be down-to-earth, even when the unbelievable is happening to her.  The next level belongs to a character that most of us have probably forgotten about by now.  It's not Prim, but rather the chatty little girl called Alys, who wanted to tag along with our main duo.  In allegorical terms, what she seems to represent is the long lost innocence that the author might have had, for however brief a fleeting moment in her childhood.  A key thing to note about this character is that she sort of vanishes from the story after the encounter with the Thing.  We don't know where she went.

We never find out if she's safe, whether she got lost in the woods, or even if the Thing devoured her.  It's the latter two outcomes that Penny and Prim worry the most about, and this sense of guilt (whether misplaced or not) might be a key motivating factor for the sense of empty desperation that colors the rest of their lives.  Reading her as an allegory for the childhood that Byatt's parents unintentionally robbed her of makes for the beginnings of an intriguing line of thought which leads us directly into the a discussion of the creature at the heart of the story.  In doing this, it makes sense to claim that we're crossing a mental borderland of sorts here, so to speak.  Jumping the line that separates the conscious part of Byatt's mind, from the territory where her own personal storehouse is hidden away, in addition to what Jung referred to as the Collective Unconscious, and that Coleridge just thought of as the Imagination.  Curiously enough, the story's portrayal of it's title character leads me to believe that while the Thing in the Forest may be a product of Jung's Unconscious, it's meaning points to an otherwise little regarded layer of the mind that doesn't get talked about as much, the Personal Unconscious.  This was an aspect of the mind Jung was well aware of.  It's where forgotten or forbidden personal traits go.

The Personal Unconscious basically serves two functions.  It is (1) that part of the mind where thoughts vanish into whenever the conscious ego is no longer using them for whatever purpose, or (2) it's where many of us tend to stow and (as they say) lock up any and all thoughts that trouble us, or that we don't like, whether it's about people, places, things, and events external to the personality, or else it's where you try to hide away aspects of yourself that you don't like.  In other words, the Personal Unconscious lives up to its title by serving as a place where you try to place troubling and unwanted thoughts and concepts that bother you on some psychological level.  This also happens to be the place where many try and stow away traumatic memories and events.  It's were someone like Byatt might well have tried to stash all her fears, bitterness, and resentments regarding her parents, her sister Margaret, or her eleven year old son who she lost to a drunk driver.  The trouble with putting all of this trauma into the Personal Unconscious, as any psychologist will tell you, is that it's a good way to let all of that negative energy just build up and fester.  When you couple that trauma with personal grief, like the kind Susan suffered at the loss of her own son, it's a recipe for a  potential mental breakdown just waiting to happen.

Sometimes this means writers can be lucky.  Stephen King once described an author as anyone who has trained their mind to misbehave.  One of the perks of this practice is that it can give the Collective Unconscious access to those traumatic elements that make up the personal side of the unaware part of the psyche and allow them an outlet it otherwise wouldn't have.  In that sense, you might described the Imagination as the mind's backup system for protecting it's sanity, and therefore it's chances of survival.  It takes that trauma, and finds the right way of transmuting it into the best possible artistic expression, thus allowing the subject a chance to come to grips with difficult aspects of their own experience.  It's what happened to Tolkien while his was busy dreaming up Middle Earth.  That act of sub-creation is what enabled him to deal with the most common trauma of all, combat experience.  He was able to take all the horrors he saw on the field of battle during the First World War, and create an outlet that was also something of a memorial at the same time as it amounted to some of the greatest prose the world has ever known.  A similar process appears to have been going on when Byatt's Thing shambled its way on stage.  It's overall appearance is meant to convey and idea of suffering, and Byatt's life is the blueprint.

I made a joking reference to the idea that the monster was Carpenter's Thing from Another World, yet there is a way in which that comparison can be of help in elucidating the greater theme of Byatt's myth.  Much like Outpost 31's interstellar visitor, it helps to consider the Loathly Worm as a composite being, or, to borrow a phrase from T.S. Eliot, as a Compound Ghost.  If I had to take a guess at what parts went into it's making, then the first part would belong to Byatt's parents, and the misery they put their eldest daughter through from years of neglect.  The second part might belong to the loneliness of the author's unhappy childhood in general.  The last part is interesting because it amounts to an example of anger and frustration turned inward on one's self, instead of others.  This is the part of Susan that might have loathed her own self for the wedge that she drove between her and her sister Margaret.  It is also the composed of the blame she put on herself for not being aware enough to save her own son from that miserable drunk son of a bitch who took him away from her.  If you were to ask me what possible goals the Thing in the Forest might have, then the best answer would have to be: looking for mercy.  Stephen King once said that part of the job of any good work of Horror was to say the unsayable, and in Byatt's case, I think I've given as good a rundown of what Antonia Susan is up to with her forest serpent.

Even Tolkien was of the opinion that the dragon was meant as a symbol for all of the worst traits that human beings can conjure up for themselves (especially whenever it's against their best interests) and that appears to be the purpose of the dragon Horror at the heart of Byatt's forest.  Much like Lovecraft's Outsider, or John Gardner's version of Grendel, the Wyrm is there to provide a portrait of the ways in which human beings can close themselves off from the necessary contacts and communal affections that seem to be a necessary requirement for this thing we call clinical sanity.  Perhaps commonsense can't help being strange in it's own right.  If this should prove to be the case, then still, it's all we've got.  Something that's possible to be thankful for about Byatt's short story is that there does seem to be this sense of recognition of the importance of such ties.  If it's there, then this realization shows all the hallmarks a long, drawn out, even painful process at times.  Both Jung and Coleridge would point out that this was yet another example of the Collective Imagination doing it's job.  It's the solid yet unconscious foundation of a workable mental stability doing it's best to keep the topmost part of the mind on a balanced and even keel.  This is where the final character in the ensemble comes in.

Of all the figures in the story, it is the figure of Primrose who winds up giving me the most pause.  The reason for this is she seems to be the one character with the closest connection to the Collective Unconscious.  She ends being the story's highest point of Inspiration.  Again, here's the point where I don't dare go too much into spoiler territory, yet the ending left a pleasant sense of surprise for me, as it ends with one of the cast assuming this latter day Mother Goose type role.  In doing so, I'd have to argue that what Prim represents are all the best qualities that Susan was able to either embody or add to her life.  In her case, it seems like the best thing that ever happened to her was being able to find a kinship with the likes of Wordsworth and Coleridge.  I can't help thinking that it was her eager contact with the works of the Lake Poets that wound up offering her a kind of constant anchor for the rest her days.  It could very well have been what helped her through a lot of the rough patches.  If so, then this is no more than what an engagement with the Imagination was able to do with Coleridge himself.  I also can't help but wonder if maybe the final image we have of Primrose in the story might be an Inspired bit allusion in their direction.  The way she bows out of the tale is in a fashion that makes her look like one of those wise, old washer-women figures that dot the symbolic landscape of Wordsworth's Prelude.

There's also the fact that the final lines offers the tantalizing possibility that the story we've just read is in fact something that is no more than a fine Gothic fairy tale being told to spellbound young charges.  Whatever the case, that's definitely a proper description of what A.S. Byatt has given her readers here.  Beyond all it's personal baggage, this is a story that functions as nothing less than a loving tribute to old enchanters like Tolkien and the Brothers Grimm.  It's a tale of an encounter with the Fantastic that wears both its lore and learning on its sleeve with a surprising ease.  The Inspirations for the tale are displayed with a careful subtlety that never overshadows the main goal of entertaining the reader.  More to the point, Byatt shows she's a capable hand at blending and melding two distinct modes of storytelling together into the same package.  This is a story that functions very much like a classic Horror story as told by writers like Arthur Machen.  It's with this artistic goal in mind that Susan builds up the right sort of narrative tension a fable like this requires to hold the audience in the palm of its hand.  At the same time, she manages to pull off a very difficult feat.  If the basic tenets of the Horror story are what shapes the nature of her beast, then it's still just one part of two ingredients that make it work.

The second, and I'd argue more important aspect to this yarn is that Byatt is able to make herself one of the handful of writers I know of who can manage to pull off one of the most difficult balancing acts.  She's managed to find a way to take the content of writers like Tolkien, Chaucer, and Spenser, and make them into something scary.  She's achieved for herself that rare level of genuine Fairy Tale Horror.  I'll swear I've seen this done well just a handful of times.  One of the other handful examples I know of is another novella in the same vein known as Faun, by Joe Hill.  The challenge facing that story went something like this.  How do you take the characters and contents of C.S. Lewis's Land of Narnia, and make them all convey the sort of Gothic threat you'd find in a George Romero film?  If you're any fan of old school Horror writing, the answer should be obvious.  All the writer needs to do is to take Lewis and blend him with Arthur Machen.  Each of them was a fan of the Classical Myths.  They also both found ways of bringing them alive for modern audiences.  Machen was just the one to figure out how to make them the stuff of nightmares.  In the case of Faun, Hill seems to have learned a lot from both writers, as he's able to reach that crucial blending point that puts his little chiller over the finish line.

The same feat happens here with Byatt's unorthodox story of a long lost dragon.  The entire short work has to build up to this one horrific moment of revelation, and when it comes time for that moment's stage debut, Susan is able to blend the two modes of Horror and Enchantment like a long time fan girl turned polished pro.  She's able to allow her title character to become this literal Thing of Horror, Wonder, and Pity.  These were all the right sort of notes to hit if you wanted to tell a true Fairy Story, according to Tolkien, and it's what happens here.  I think a lot of what makes Susan's effort work so well as they do is because of this subtle, yet undeniable note of what can only describe as Big Heartedness.  There's an odd yet unmistakable sense of joy emanating from the tale.  It starts out as an almost inaudible background note that soon grows into the dominant theme of the finished product.  It's almost as if a dragon had been slain.  I think that's down to the possibility that with this story, we see the author has made her way closer at least to that needful sense of balance she'd been searching for with every passing year, and each published book.  I don't think I can tell you how much, or even if A.S. Byatt was able to achieve that necessary sense of closure for all the mistakes of the past, yet the final note of this story makes it sound like she might have found a decent measure of solace for what had gone before.

This is a work that seems to show some understanding of what it means to discover Shakespeare's quality of mercy, even if it means sifting value from dross.  I think it's this final note of hinted at consolation which allows the story to find it's ultimate success.  Whatever the case, I know for certain that I'm able to give Antonia Susan Byatt's The Thing in the Forest a well deserved recommendation.    

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